the green notebook

I don’t think I need to explain what Moomin is.

”What are you?” Sniff heard a voice asking behind him. He turned around to see who it was and saw a little boy standing there. The boy was short, shorter than Sniff and had dark short hair and big dark eyes. He stared at Sniff like Sniff wasn’t there. Sniff fast looked behind him if the question was meant to someone else but there wasn’t anyone near. The boy was smiling.

“My name is Sniff. But you know, you should introduce yourself first and tell me your name and what are you”

“Oh, you don’t need to know my name, Sniff,” little boy said. Sniff didn’t know what he meant by it. Of course he needs to know little boy’s name. If not, then he couldn’t tell about him to others when he returns to Moomin’s house.
Wait a little. Where he was? Sniff started to look around and saw long straight white corridor where he and boy were. Lot of doors everywhere. Some doors were open and some closed. More little boys and little girls and they all had same clothes. And they were all same coloured. Everything was black-white.

Little boy still looked at Sniff. He calmly walked past him, “If you’re lost then you can follow me,” he said. Sniff saw him still smiling and soon ran after the little boy.

“You’re white just like my moomin friends, do you know moomins?” Sniff asked.

“No, I’ve never heard of them”, boy said still smiling. How strange he was.

“Why here are no any colours?”

“Colours?”

“Yes, colours.”

“I’ve never heard of those before, what are they?”

“W-what?” Sniff yelled, “You don’t know what colour is? So you don’t have colours here?” That was bad, really bad. If there were no any colours, then there wouldn’t be any gold or diamonds either, those things which shines all the colours of rainbow! What was this place, and why was het here? He wanted back to Moomin’s house!

Sniff has stopped walking and soon noticed it. Little boy didn’t stop and now was far away and walked inside one room.
Sniff ran after him and stepped inside the big room full of little tables and each table had one chair close to it. Little boy sat on one chair close to window where you couldn’t see outside. Sniff walked next to little boy and noticed him taking two big books out of his bag.

“You can sit there, next to me,” boy said and pointed the table front of Sniff. Sniff sat down and became curious about those big books. Maybe there were pictures with colours. Every book has pictures with colours, expect Moomin papa’s books. He only writes and doesn’t draw pictures. That was so boring. If there are no pictures, Sniff wouldn’t read it. That’s why he wants that Moomin papa tells his stories. Sniff liked to listen.

“Good morning, class,” calm voice said and Sniff saw older woman coming in to the room. She had also dark hair and white skin, no colours either.

“Open the page 489,” woman said and every little boy and girl followed her lead. Sniff searched and waited and looked carefully if there were any coloured pictures, but no. All he could see was letters, words, and some pictures of random circles and numbers he couldn’t understand.

“Why are you like that?” little boy asked. Sniff didn’t quite understand what he meant again.

“What do you mean?” Sniff asked little gloomily. Little boy stared at him still smiling a little, but there wasn’t any emotions in his eyes. Sniff were confused because the emotionless eyes and smiling mouth. It was like there was main course and dessert on the same plate.
Sniff looked around him but didn’t saw any other smiling. No, he couldn’t see anyone’s faces. Gosh this place is strange!

“Are you happy?” Sniff asked.

“Happy?” boy was still smiling, “oh, do you mean that I smile? I have heard about that if you smile, people think you’re happy. That’s why I need to smile, so people wouldn’t be worried.”

“But that’s stupid!” Sniff cried, “If you smile and you’re not happy then you lie.”

“But isn’t it better not to cause any troubles to others?”

“Quiet there!” teacher said.

“We are sorry, teacher,” boy quick responded.

What was he saying? If you don’t want to smile then you don’t need to. If Little My smiled all the time, it would be as strange as if Moomin mama stopped cooking! That though didn’t make Sniff feel any better at all. Actually he started to feel hungry all of sudden. Now he really wanted to go back home. However that teacher was really scary, like Fillyjonk, so Sniff didn’t want to say anything to make her any angrier. He wanted to play with his friends and see colours again, he missed them. Sniff felt like crying. What a horrible place.

Lesson finally ended and that scary-Fillyjonk-teacher left.

“It’s time for lunch now,” boy said and that was best thing Sniff had heard all day!

“Yes! Let’s go now,” Sniff begged and stood up.

“We can eat here, Sniff,” boy said calmly and picked up his bag on the table. He saw Sniff sad.

“Don’t worry, we can share my lunch if you don’t have your own with you.”

“T-thank you” Sniff sat down and waited for the boy to take his lunch ready. Sniff moved his table right next to boy’s table so they linked. The boy took his lunch and one big notebook out of his bag.

“Green!” Sniff shocked.

“Green?” Boy surprised.

“Yes, that notebook! It’s green! It has a colour!” Sniff smiled and stared at the notebook like he has never seen one before.

“This is colour?” Boy checked out the notebook carefully. He was focused and you could see that in his eyes this time. Then looked at Sniff.

“It is really beautiful”

Sniff took the notebook from the little boy and looked at it carefully too, as carefully as he could before boy took the notebook from him.
“Give it back!” the boy now hold the notebook against his chest and looked down, he didn’t smile.

“I-it’s really precious to me. So please,” Sniff was really surprised but he understood. By precious, he meant that it’s like gold and diamonds are to Sniff. He wouldn’t ever let anyone take them away from him.

“I found this. It was in my room on the table this morning and I feel like I must keep it with me,” now smile had come back to his face and he left the notebook lay on the table under his arm. “Let’s eat.”

“I will call you Green then, because that notebook is green too,” Sniff smiled and Green smiled back. He didn’t mind that at all.

Soon after someone walked in the classroom and curious Sniff checked out who it was. It was a boy, taller than Green and he had a dark short hair too. But this boy’s clothes were all dark, Sniff was pretty sure it was some kind of tracksuit. But that what took Sniff’s full attention was that big beautiful basketball. Its colour was close enough to gold and Sniff drooled. Taller boy came closer and sat down on the chair front of them. He held the basketball close to him and after a while played with it, threw it to wall so it bounced back and so on.

“Does he like basketball?” Sniff asked quietly so only Green could hear it.

“I love it,” basketball-guy said. Sniff surprised, was he mad? No, this boy didn’t smile at all but he wasn’t mad. He waved to Green and Green waved back to him, smiling.

“I will join you,” he said and Green nodded.
They ate colourless food in silent and Green finished before Sniff (Sniff got more to eat because he was taller). Green opened his green notebook and took a pencil from his pencil case. He seemed to start doodling. Right when his pencil touched the notebook everything felt different. Green’s eyes which were dark became beautiful green, pictures he drew, animals, plants, birds, seemed to live. Sniff stopped eating and watched how Green drew. Eyes wide open Sniff stared at the paper as the doodles coloured themselves and everything were dazzling.

“That’s so awesome!” Sniff said with his eyes shining like stars, “Can you draw huge gold crown too?”

Green smiled (like always) and started to draw crown. Sniff was so excited that he cried a little.

“How do you do that?”

“I have no idea. It’s the first time I use this notebook,” Green smiled, now for real. Basketball-guy stared at the colours and so did many others in the classroom too. Drawer didn’t notice but some kids gathered around the table. Sniff noticed, he also noticed that one in the classroom who was reading a book alone in the corner. She had a pin, white chef hat and red rose in it. A red rose! More colours!
Sniff wanted to know more about that red pin and girl, but he couldn’t leave his gold crown alone.

“It would suit you,” when said that, Green drew Sniff there. The gold crown on his head and right after that a huge gold crown, just like the one Green drew, appeared to Sniff’s head.

“W-wow!” Sniff fell holding the crown, “It’s heavy!” he whined but were dazzled of how beautiful it was, that basketball was nothing compared to it.
Green closed the notebook and at the same time the huge crown disappeared.

“No!” Sniff cried, “My beautiful crown!”

“Oh, I’m sorry Sniff,” Green said smiling. If you smile, smile for real Sniff though, still crying because his crown.
Those few kids who came to see Green drawing, soon walked back to where they were and everything was back to how it was; colourless, tiring.

“You fools,” girl with the red pin yelled behind them. When she made it here? The girl stared at Sniff.

“What are you?” Sniff didn’t how she spoke to him.

“His name is Sniff,” Green said before Sniff could. Girl stared at Sniff from head to toe and crossed her arms.

“Hmp,” she walked next to Green, “Show me that notebook.” Green didn’t want to give it to her but girl’s strong expression made him to give it to her. Sniff bet that this girl didn’t have any friends. She was close to Little My but seemed to be smarter. Pin, as Sniff decided to call her, opened the green notebook. Doodles were all colourless and now just beautiful sketches, they weren’t living on that paper anymore.
Suddenly Pin took a pencil and drew chef hat. When Pin was done, she looked disappointed.

“Why is it not working?” she mumbled. Sniff came to look at that sketch and so did the basketball-guy.

“It’s because it’s not ready yet,” basketball-guy guessed and then Green took the notebook and pencil and drew rose on that hat, exactly like Pin’s pin. At the same time that hairpin on Pin’s head grew bigger and clean white chef hat with beautiful red rose appeared.

“Ooh,” Pin blushed, her tight expression was now gone. That’s much better, Sniff thought, but it didn’t last long. Green closed the notebook.

“Don’t,” Sniff panicked, “It will disappear!” But it didn’t.

“E-eeeh?” Sniff couldn’t understand. Why his gold crown disappeared, but that chef hat stayed? Pin smiled her self-confident smile.

“It’s because this is what I really want,” she said, “That’s why.” Sniff was even more out of it, of course he wanted that gold crown! What is she talking about?

“So you want to become a chef?” basketball-guy asked. Pin blushed and nodded.

“But you can’t,” basket-guy added. Pin snapped.

“Of course I can’t! There’s no way for it because my parents don’t let me. They want that I make career as an musician!”

“I think chef is much better choice,” Sniff said quickly.

“Of course it is, because I want to do it,” Pin glared at Sniff like he was a fool, “Just like that guy with basketball wants to play basketball, but he can’t.” She added and stared at the basket-guy now. He was still sad, was it because he couldn’t play like Pin asserted?

“Why you can’t?” Sniff was curious.

“Because there are no one else like me,” he answered, “It’s impossible for me to play it alone.”

“I see,” Sniff muttered, “Why don’t you ask those faceless kids to play with you?”

Basket-guy looked around, “But I can’t connect with them, they don’t understand me at all.”

“They are just studying,” Pin said, “like all of us.”

“Just studying? Don’t you have fun and play with each other every day?” Sniff started to feel a little desperate.

“My parents said that if I don’t study I will die,” Green answered. “I don’t want to die so I need to study hard.” That was a shock to Sniff. He didn’t study; did that mean he would die at any time possible?

“But,” Green continued, “I’m happy as long as I can doodle.”

“AAAH! That’s why your notebook is coloured!” Sniff realised, “And your pin is coloured” he pointed at Pin’s hat, “And your basketball is coloured too,” Sniff felt so smart. They all stared at Sniff, that made sense and they all knew it, but they couldn’t do anything.

“It’s so easy for you to have simple dream,” Pin said aggressively and patted Green’s head. Green didn’t say anything.

“What do you want, Sniff?” Basket-guy asked.

“I want shiny and beautiful thinks, like gold and diamonds!” Sniff’s eyes were full of stars and he drooled.

Pin laughed, “But I don’t see any gold or diamonds with you, Sniff.”

“Of course you can’t, because I don’t have any! That’s why I want it,” Sniff cried again. The three others were silent and looked at each other.

“But you are coloured,” Basket-guy said, “You can have what you want but you don’t have it now,” what was that complicated talking Sniff wondered.

“Draw something here Sniff,” Green recommended and opened his green notebook again. Sniff took a pencil and started doodling, he wasn’t that good at drawing as Green, but it was fun and soon it was ready, Moomin’s house. Green took the pencil from Sniff and drew Sniff in the garden of the house.

“It was fun,” Green smiled and then disappeared, like everything else and right then Sniff noticed that he was back home.

“Here he is!” Sniff heard a familiar voice. It was Little My!

“Little M-,” Sniff shouted happily but Little My kicked him so he never finished it, “Ouch!”

“Where have you been?” Little My yelled and all his friends came running to see him. Sniff couldn’t remember a thing. It was like he had been sleeping all day and saw some strange, really strange dream but now couldn’t remember it at all.

“I don’t know,” he mumbled.

“What? Are you making fun of me?” Little My was annoyed, “we have been looking for you everywhere.”

“Sorry,” Sniff laughed.

“Don’t laugh!” Little My kicked him again.

“Ouch! Stop it!” now he was annoyed too.

Moomintroll and Snufkin laughed. Snorkmaiden opened the door and stepped outside. She had really familiar pin in her hair and Sniff stared at it.

“What is it?” Snorkmaiden asked.

“That pin,” Sniff pointed at small red rose pin.

“Oh, you mean this?” Snorkmaiden took the pin and gave it to Sniff, “I just found it. You can have it if you want. It doesn’t suit me after all.” Sniff took the pin and smiled.

“Thanks.”

”Now it’s time to eat,” Moomin mama came to say and they all ran inside. In the kichen Sniff noticed Moomin mama holding a pretty green notebook.

”Can I have that notebook, Moomin mama?” He quickly asked.

”Well, of course. I found it before, is it yours?”

”Yes,” Sniff answered. Why did he said that? It wasn’t his, but he felt like he knew who’s it was and decided to give it back to the owner when he remembers that person.

”Stinky!” Moomintroll said with the same tone of voice like always when he sees Stinky, ”What is he doing with that basketball? I’m sure he stole it again.”

”Basketball?” Sniff ran to the window and saw Stinky playing with it. Without a warning he ran outside after Stinky.

”Stinky! Give it to me!” he shouted, ”I want it!”

”Whaat?” Stinky surprised, ”You can’t have it, it’s mine! I found it!” And so whole Moomin family ran after Stinky and tried to get the ball from him because they though that it was Sniff’s.

If you watched carefully and focused to listen, you could saw the scary witch flying with her broom and laughing, ”Who’s next?”

The Last Spin

The last spin is a short story written by Evan Hunter.

The story tells about two young guys, Tigo and Danny. They are from different clubs so they are supposed to be enemies. Their clubs have some things to settle, so Tigo and Danny need to play Russian roulette. That is a good way to settle problems because that doesn’t cause any law trouble or street fights. Danny and Tigo were picked up for this by accident; therefore they didn’t even know each other before this meeting. Tigo and Danny don’t have anything personal against each other.

Tigo and Danny meet in the basement. Tigo put one cartridge into the cylinder, twirled it and then the game began. Tigo said that he can start so that Danny could have a break. But actually Tigo seems to be as nervous as Danny. By turns they twirled the gun and fired it but they are lucky and nothing happens. Tigo added extra bullets to the gun because he wanted to end the game like his club told him.

During the game they have a conversation about their future, guns and their family. They also talk about their clubs. Tigo tells Danny that he doesn’t like his club members very much and Danny feels the same way about his own club. They realize that they have many things in common. For example they are both in their clubs just because they live in that area and they both like guns (and they know much about guns) and they would like to join the Army.

The game goes on and nothing happens. Tigo and Danny get to know each other better and they start liking each other. Now it’s harder for them to continue the game. Tigo suggests that they could stop the game. No matter what the club says. He wants to choose his friends by personality. Danny agreed and they decide to spin the gun for the last time. Before the spin they planned to go on the lake with their girlfriends next Sunday. Earlier they couldn’t think about the future because they didn’t know witch one is going to die. They were both excited about that they met by accident and now they have become friends. Finally a reliable friend outside the club.

Neither of them was scared about the last spin. They were so sure that nothing will happen that they didn’t even think about it. But they weren’t so lucky anymore. The gun fired the bullet at the last spin. Their friendship was over before it was even properly started.

All in all, the story was very good. At the beginning of the story Danny didn’t dare to close his eyes while pulling the trigger because Tigo was staring at him and Danny was scared that Tigo would do something to him. That’s kind of ironic because Danny should scare more the gun which was in his temple. I think Togo and Danny has joined their clubs because they didn’t have other options. Maybe they thought that if they don’t join the club, the members start molest them.

The language was quite colloquial and sometimes hard to understand. For example ‘’without a big street diddlebop, you dig?’’. But that style fit very well to the text. It would sound funny if those club members would speak a standard language. Language brings more credibility to the text. Writer has also use unusual words like club and piece instead of the better known gang and gun.

It was interesting and exciting to read the text and guess what’s going to happen next. The end of the story was surprising and sad.

written by meow

A peaceful moment

It was a peaceful moment in the Shire, the home of hobbits, with the birds singing and everything being just perfectly fine. Even though Sauron had just been defeated and the long-awaited peace had finally come to the Middle-Earth, there were still those who needed action in their life.

Meriadoc Brandybuck, or Merry, and Peregrin Took, shortly Pippin, were lying on a soft and fresh grass, completely satisfied in every possible way. After all, they were one the heroes who had been in the Fellowship of the Ring and been part of saving the earth from the dark. Since they were heroes, they had gotten everything they needed, like cigarettes and food for example.

The both of them were just lying on their back, enjoying the gentle breezes of the wind, the touch of the slightly damp grass, the singing of birds, the flowing sound of the river and the utterly beautiful view of the evening sunset. Those were all things they couldn’t do after they were included to the Fellowship, they didn’t know, whether they could see tomorrow or not.

Pippin sighed, ”Hey, do you remember when I touched that stupid crystal ball and in consequence we got separated for awhile?” he asked, his words sounding more like sleep-talking than normal talking. Merry looked briefly at the other fellow slightly grinning, ”Of course. I was afraid that it would be our farewell..But. I’m glad it wasn’t though!” he said happily while sitting up and ruffled Pippin’s hair.

Pippin smiled and also sat up. A silence fell upon them, but it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a silence remembering the adventure they had been trough, a serene one. ”It was quite an adventure..” Pippin said almost inaudibly, yearning could be heard from his voice. Merry nodded thoughtfully.

Then at the same time, both of them looked up. The hobbits turned to look at each other simultaneously, ”Shall we go?” Merry asked enthusiastically and Pippin nodded smiling.

The Last Spin

The Last Spin is a short story written by Evan Hunter. It tells a story of two young men who are chosed to settle a conflict which is going on between their gangs, instead of all the gangs members taking part in a street fight. These two men, Danny, who is the main character of the short story, and Tigo, a member of the rival gang. Danny and Tigo have to settle their gangs’ disagreements by playing Russian roulette until one of them is dead.

The story develops as Danny and Tigo take turns pulling the trigger (at first there is only one cartridge in the sylinder) and everytime they pull it, they learn more from each other and start realizing that they do in fact have very much in common. Both of them have joined their gangs only because the gang was ruling the street they happened to live in. And either one of the boys didn’t even like their gang’s members. In the end they realize that they can choose their own friends. In the very beginning of the story Danny thinks of Tigo as his enemy only because he was told so and later on he realizes how stupid that is. I think this is one of the important things that the writer has wanted to bring up.The story is located in a dark basement, which creates an istant tension to it. And also the story’s concept is very interesting and it sucked me in during the very first lines. The tension rises trhoughout the whole story as Danny and Tigo add more cartridges to the sylinder. Thew plot progresses mostly through the dialogue, and they speak colloquial language, they use the word ”piece” for gun for example. They also speak of their  gangs as ”clubs”, which was pretty prominent.

In the end, Danny asks Tigo to come to the lake with him next sunday, this is a sign that they have become friends and also means that they will leave behind their former lives with their gangs. They make a deal that only one last spin will be made, with rather a sad consequense. I must say that this novel suprised me really positively, the characters were interesting and had much depth. It also tells how cruel life in a gang can be.

Fan Fiction: Kaito’s Adventure in Wonderland

This is a crossover about Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, the story by Lewis Carroll and Alice Human Sacrifice, a song sung by Vocaloids. Vocaloids are voice synthesizer programmes produced by Crypton Future Media Inc.
It was a beautiful day outside. Warm wind was blowing and there were no clouds in the sky. The blue haired boy was sitting in a large garden, which was full of blossoming flowers, green bushes and trees. He was sitting at a water fountain, minding his own business. He heard a noise coming from behind a tree right next to the fountain. Surprised, he looked at the tree and saw a white rabbit with a red ribbon on its neck. The rabbit stayed there a while, staring at the blue haired boy and then turned its look away and ran towards the other trees in the forest. Something told the boy to follow that rabbit, but he did not quite understand what it was so he went after the rabbit.

Before the boy noticed, he was in the middle of a forest. He had never been there before and the further he followed the rabbit, the darker it got in the forest. Suddenly the boy stopped, which was not a very wise thing to do. The ground right in front of him started to open and sense it was too dark for him to see his feet, he did not notice there was a big rabbit hole right in front of him. When the boy finally decided to follow the rabbit again, he stepped right in to the hole and fell.
He did realise he was falling. He shouted as he fell. The falling felt like an eternity and he was surrounded by darkness. He did not know if he could ever touch the ground again. Then, he saw light coming from below. The blue haired boy knew he would finally come to the bottom of the hole. Softly he landed on the ground, right into a bush of hay.

Once he was done cleansing himself of the hay, he saw the white rabbit again. The rabbit looked at him and touched its ribbon with paw. The blue haired boy looked at the rabbit. It started to glow some kind of weird light and little by little it transformed into a girl with long silvery hair. ”I knew you would follow me!”, the girl said and smiled. The boy looked at her. He was still surprised that rabbits could transform into humans. ”So, what is your name, stranger?”
”My name? Why don’t you tell me who you are first and explain where I am?” the boy said calmly and irritated. ”Sorry, my name is IA and welcome to Wonderland. I am working for the queen, like everyone else here. I am on my way to a tea party with the Hatter. Do you want to join me, stranger?”, she said. ”Alright, but enough with that stranger thing. My name is Kaito. Instead, saying Wonderland doesn’t tell me much about where exactly I am”, the boy said. ”Don’t worry about it. Just follow me, to the tea party. However, we must pass through that forest right there. We have to be careful; a psychopath lives on that road”.

After hearing that the boy was not too sure if he should be with IA, but he thought that it is better to follow the rabbit girl than wander around the Wonderland while he knows nothing about the place itself. They wandered along a path, which lead to a field full of roses. There were many colored roses, but mostly they were red and white. The path was crossing the field right in the middle and lead to a dark forest. The boy thought that it must be just the forest the girl was talking about.
”Are you still there? Good. Now, we must be very careful, because the forest I mentioned before is right in front of us. I was not joking about that psychopath thing you know. She looks like an angel but she is a devil in disguise. Don’t answer her, no matter what she asks”, IA said and took her first steps on the path towards the dark forest.

The trees looked like they were crying in pain. There were some awful scratches on them and they were in very bad condition in any kind of way. The path was all dark and muddy. There were footprints on the ground. They looked like the person walking before had high heels. The boy thought the place they were heading must be a wonderful one since they really have to go through this awful forest.
”Well, well, well. Who do we have here? The little lost rabbit and a stranger, eh? Heading to the tea party again?”, a girl with brown hair, red dress and high heels said. ”That is none of your business. We are just passing through”, IA said. ”But it is my business! Who is this stranger with you? Do not tell me you suspect that he is Alice. You know very well what happened to the last ones,” the red girl said. ”I know that very well Meiko. No need to remind me about that. But it could be that he is Alice!”, IA said and turned her gaze forward, to the way they were heading. ”Please, do not give me that crap. You know Alice is not ever going to come. It’s just a sad legend that will never come true”, Meiko said. ”Just shut up. We are leaving now”, IA said and started walking away from Meiko. The boy just followed IA and looked once behind to see Meiko. She was grinning and waving at him but he just turned his look back forward and kept going along with IA.

”What is this thing about Alice? Is it some kind of a legend around here?”, the boy asked to break the silence. ”Yes, sort of. Not everyone believes in it but I want to believe that Alice will come and save us”, IA said. ”So is this Alice from another world or something? Like me?”, the boy asked. IA was quiet for a long while until she said: ”Yes”. The two did not say a word to each other until they were at the end of the road. There was a table full of sweets and teacups. By the table, there was the Hatter and a girl with green hair. ”IA! You are here!”, the Hatter shouted. ”Hello. How are you doing?”, IA said. ”We are great! And even better now that you are here!”, the girl with green hair said. ”So, who is this stranger with you?”, the Hatter asked. ”He is Kaito. From the other world. Kaito, these people are Gakupo and Gumi”, IA said. The boy nodded and looked at the Hatter.
”By the way. That girl in the forest said something like that there have been persons from the other world before. What has happened to them?”, Kaito asked. There was a long silence, dying to break. The three of them were looking at each other. Then the Hatter said: ”You are right. There have been people from the other world before. Even we three are from the other world. Nevertheless, none of us has been Alice, the person who will save us all and bring us back to the other world. Basically, many have come to Wonderland, but none have gone back”, the Hatter explained. Kaito looked at him. No one has ever returned. He does not stand much chance either. He wants to get back! He wants to go back so bad he never thought he would even miss his dull life back there.

”So, is there a way to get back?”, the boy asked. ”Of course there is, but no one knows it. Otherwise we wouldn’t be here right?”, the Hatter said. Gumi just nodded and looked at Kaito. ”The legend says there should be some sign on Alice so that we would know it really is Alice. Why don’t we check that?”, Gumi said. ”Wait! What are you going to do?”, Kaito shouted. He suspected that they might do something he does not like. ”We are just going to take a little look”, Gumi said calmly with a sparkle in her eye. ”Gumi. Wait. Let’s just ask him”, the Hatter said. ”Fine”, she replied and looked at IA, waiting for her to ask the question. ”Do you have a mark on your body? It is said to look like a note. A musical note”, IA asked. The boy thought about it. He thought and thought but he still was not sure if he had one. Then he remembered a thing that happened to him while he was in elementary school. All the other boys in his class had bullied him about a mark on his back. They called him the music boy, because the mark looked like a note.
”Yes. I have a mark like that. On my left shoulder”, the boy said. The Hatter, Gumi and IA were looking at each other. First, they looked a little dumb, as if someone had just hit their head with something. Then they started to smile and laugh. They were overwhelmed by the joy. They would finally find the way out! However, there were many problems ahead of these four. They just did not know it yet.

”We must celebrate this!”, Gumi shouted. ”You finally did it IA! You found him!”, the Hatter said. ”Gumi, Gakupo. You are forgetting one thing. Alice is finally here. Did we not dream about getting out of here? We do not have time for celebrating! The legend also says that even if Alice does come, there is a time limit! Exactly week after Alice has come, he has to find the way out or even Alice will be stuck here forever! This may be our only chance!”, IA said. The boy was only staring at them. Then he said: ”So I have just week time to find my way out of here?”
The silence fell over the four again. They were looking at each other. ”Yes. That’s right”, IA said and looked at Kaito. He nodded. ”The easiest way is probably to go to the Queen. She knows much more about everything than I do. She also knows how to get out of here”, IA said. ”I don’t know the way to the castle of hers. I need someone to accompany me”, the boy said. ”I’ll come with you”, IA told him and they said goodbye to the Hatter and Gumi.
”We have to go up there, right through that labyrinth. I hope that’s alright with you”, IA said. The boy nodded and followed her.

The labyrinth was enormous. It was made of rose bushes, so you had to watch your footing, if you did not want to trip on the roots. The most difficult thing was that you could not know where you were. For the boy’s sake, IA knew the route by her heart. She had been there so many times that it would have been strange if she could not remember the way up to the castle. Suddenly, a pink smoke appeared right in front of them. After the smoke cleared, there was a girl with long, pink hair standing. ”Hello Bunny. On your way to the castle? It is such a shame that the Queen is on a bad mood today”, the girl said. ”What do you want, cat?”, IA asked her. ”Nothing in particular. Who is this handsome young boy with you? An outsider?”, she asked. ”He is Kaito. He is also the Alice from the legends. But that is none of your business, Luka”, IA said and walked past her. Luka did not say anything. The smoke surrounded her again and she disappeared. ”You don’t seem to like that person much”, Kaito said. ”I and Luka have been at odds for years. Don’t worry about it”, she replied and the way up to the Queen continued.

The labyrinth finally ended and they arrived to a garden. There was a card guard right there when IA and the boy came from the labyrinth. ”Good day to you IA. On your way to see the Queen? Who is that stranger with you?”, the card guard asked. ”He is Alice. He needs to see the Queen”, she said and walked past the guard. The boy just nodded at the guard as he passed him as a hello. The stairway to the doors of the castle was right next to them. IA walked right in through the doors. She walked ahead past great halls and hallways until they arrived to the Queen’s room. ”Good afternoon, Queen Miku”, IA said and bended. The boy followed her moves and stayed quiet. ”Hello IA. Who is that person with you?”, she asked. ”He is Alice, your Highness. His name is Kaito”, IA said. ”Pleasure to meet you”, the boy said and smiled.
”No need to be so modest. He really is Alice? My, if that is true, we can finally get out of here! Only thing you must do to open the portal to the other world is sing!” the Queen said and got excited. ”Sing? What must I sing?”, the boy asked. ”Wait. You must prove me that you truly are Alice before I tell you anything!”, the Queen said. The boy took his shirt off to show the Queen the mark on his left shoulder. ”Fine. That is a good proof enough. We shall tell you now. But first, put that shirt back on”, the Queen said.
The boy put his shirt back and listened carefully. ”You must sing this song we will sing you. You must sing it right from the bottom of your heart or otherwise it will not work and the portal will not open. We will sing it to you now, so listen carefully. We will sing it only once”, the Queen said and started to sing. It was the most beautiful song he had ever heard. The Queen’s voice was pure, high and soft.
The song was a story about siblings that lived in a world of evil people. They were twins and they lived happily together until the other one of the siblings, the girl, was taken to a royal family where she will be raised to become the next princess. The other, the boy, was raised elsewhere. One day the boy was sent to the new princess as a servant. When he arrived to the castle, he saw his sister. She had become the princess and he would now serve her. One day, his sister told the boy to go to a town near by. There he saw a beautiful girl with long green hair and a handsome man with blue hair with her. She smiled at the boy. Back at the castle, the sister of his tells him to kill that girl he saw earlier. He did so, with tears falling down his cheeks. Later the man from earlier found out and wanted to kill the princess and she was ordered to be executed. The boy did not want his sister to die, so he said that they will change places and he will die in her place. He said that no one would notice the difference because they were twins. She left crying and went to see her brother get executed. In memory he said that he would play with his sister again later.
The boy started singing the same song. Out of thin air, a door started to appear. In front of the door, there were two childs, holding each other’s hands. When the song ended, they started talking. ”Hello Alice”, the boy in front of the door said. ”We are the ones you were just singing about. I am Rin”, the girl said. ”And I am Len. Through this door, you can get back to your world. Once you step through this door, Alice, the door will close”, he said. ”And it will not open for anyone else. When you are back in your world, everyone else who is from another world will appear there soon too. They just disappear into smoke in here and will appear in their world from smoke”, Rin explained.
”Alright. I shall get going then”, Kaito said and walked to the door. It opened and he stepped inside. He was flying up. A strong wind was carrying him up and soon he noticed light from above. He was almost back. He landed on his feet, right to the garden he was at before he left for his adventure. He was at the tree where IA had been before he started to follow her. He was back home. Moreover, he could not have been happier about it.

Sweet little lies

Sweet little lies is a novel written by American author Lauren Conrad and it was first released as a hardcover on february 2010. It is the second of the three-book L.A. Candy series. The trilogy deals with the theme of reality television and what kind of consequences it has. Lauren Conrad has subjective knowledge of this topic, because she has herself been part of the main cast of the reality television series The Hills and Laguna Beach: The Real Orange County. So you can rely on that she knows what she is writing about. Reality television is certainly current topic these days. Almost all of us watch it, but only few of us can really perceive that there is hole another reality behind the scenes.

The main character of the book is Jane, average girl next door. Jane and her life-long best friend Scarlett move together in Los Angeles and land their new reality show, “L.A. Candy”, just weeks after moving into the city. They seems to have all what they ever dreamed about or at least they believe so. When Jane makes one mistake things start falling in part and people get hurt. Jane finds herself at the centre of a huge tabloid scandal and starts spending time with her new ”frenemy” co-star Madison. Madison wants to get as much fame as possible and that is her one and only life goal.  But you should not forget that fame comes with a price. Jane realizes that she doesn’t just have fans, she has enemies as well. But, they always say, keep your friends close and your enemies closer.

In this book there is used a lot of young adults spoken language, slang words and abbreviations. At first it could be a little disturbing, but you get used to it pretty soon. Otherwise the vocabulary of the book is not too challenging, it is pretty much similar than the language in today’s youth television series. Sweet little lies has been translated into Finnish also but what I have heard it is not worth reading. So if you are considering to read this book choose definitely the original one.

Sweet little lies is not mind blowing masterpiece. It is fun entertainment full of luscious drama, like soap opera inside book covers. Because of the great deal of drama I can claim that this book is anything but tiresome. The end of the book draw the starting line for the next book and persuade to read it. Even if Sweet little lies is a part of the trilogy you don’t have  to read the previous book before in oder to keep up with the story. This book is obviously written for teenage girls so I would recommend it to all the girls who enjoy a little drama.

The Last Spin

Danny and Tigo. Two men in a basement meeting each other the first and at the same the last time. Both of them have lost themselves to a bit wrong environment, in the middle of the gang war. They are not supposed to know nothing else of each other than one of them wears a blue and gold gang jacket and the other has a green and orange one. But the end of story is quite a different. During the cylinder twirles, seeking for a cartridge-fulled hole, ready to being launched to kill other one of the men, the men are not so unknown to each other that they should have been.

The reason to that they meet each other overall is that the blue and gold gang had become to the wrong area last night instead of that there supposed to be a truce between the two gangs. Now it was Danny and Tigo´s turn to prove their loyality to their own gangs, being ready to kill for the higher position in the gang.

Tigo is a volunteer to try first the cylinder because he has more less to lose than Danny. Both of them postpone the first turn so long as they can. In common the two men have the will to leave behind the gang life and start a new one. Both of them are trying to keep up the illusion that it´s going to be OK and they will survive this some way. Danny tries to take thinks out of hard reality and suggests to Tigo going to the nearby lake with their girlfriends, though he knows that it is just utopia. He could have not suggest it any earlier because the situation isn´t relaxed enough to think anything else that the mission in that moment. To make the situation running faster, Tigo adds extra bullets to the gun. Before the men know each other far to well.

Danny doesn´t dare to show his feelings that he is scared, because the enemy is an enemy and thinks that Tigo would laugh to him and if the couldn´t survive away from the basement, Tigo might tell in front of the both two gangs that the blue and gold- gang only has cowders as their members.Tigo doesn´t bother to hide his fear.

The two characters have originally joined their gangs because they had to find a place where to escape the broken family relations and poverty, to earn money as quick and as lot as possible, may because sending a part of it to the family. The gang brought safety to moving on the streets, at least for a while. 

The colloquial language is a good add to bring more underworld athmosphere to the story.

 

 

 

There is a small gun on the table right next to three cartridges. In a basement room two serious looking men are sitting against each other wore in different color clothes.  “The Last spin” is a shot story written by Evan Hunter. The short story tells about a conversation of these two men and the development of their friendship while they are playing pernicious game called Russian roulette. It is a game where is only one bullet in cylinder of a revolver. Cylinder is spun and then the gun is pointed at own head. At this point the probability of staying alive is five against one.

I think the story starts quite steeply because right in the beginning it is said that the men are enemies. Maybe Hunter has wanted to accentuate that so the development of men’s friendship would be seen easier. The Discussion seems to be a little bit awkward at first, but in the end of the first round of roulette men have found something in common. I would find the playing situation uncomfortable or very scary whole time, but nervous climate turns to more relaxed. But there is still fear of death in the air despite joking and nice chatting, of course. They are still playing deadly game.

The only reason why Danny and Tigo are meeting is that their clubs have said so. Clubs have some disagreement with borders of their areas and Danny and Tigo are wanted to settle it by playing Russian roulette.  Like it would solve anything if other one of these men dies! Ultimately men don’t care what their clubs will say and they become friends and plan going to the lake after all this. This proves that men respect friendship much more than their clubs.

Finally men settle that this round is the last one. There are three bullets in cylinder of revolver and odds to die are 50-50. Last bulling of trigger and men are going to cut the game off but Danny in not that lucky and dies. Tigo’s weeping proves that the deep friendship can be arisen in quite short time.

The dialect of the language what they are speaking is a little bit vulgar, which strengthen the effect about men’s background in gangs. Some words, especially auxiliary verbs, are dropped out from the lines of the men. Here are few examples for the way they are speaking: “Hey, you got to tryin, man,” and other one: “so what’re you gonna do, huh?” They use a lot of colloquial language and it creates certain ambiance to the story.

Full Stop, Alecia McKenzie

Alecia McKenzie’s short story ”Full Stop” seems pretty simple when you read it first time. An old but obviously sharp-witted grandmother and her grandchild Carmen are writing short letters to each others. Letters dealt with everyday things like painting a house but also difficult family relationships. The interesting point is that Grandma writes without punctuation. Why is that, maybe she is lazy or she just don’t know how to write right? Carmen doesn’t either use commas and full stops in her first letter to Grandma. Probably she does that because she wants to test how Grandma would respond to it. Well, Grandma writes back wondering “Why are you writing me without punctuation?”. Clearly she can write right. Grandma also remind how she had to worked hard that Carmen would be able to go to school. From this we can deduce Grandma appreciates studying. She seems a little bit ungrateful too as she thanks Carmen for the money yet saying it’s not enough for the painter’s payment so she had to paint the house herself. This part of the text also reveals that Grandma really is a truly Christian. She tells example she prays every night and she wish God Bless to Carmen at the end of the letter.                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Grandma has raised Carmen because her own mother has left to England after having Carmen. Women have totally different versions of events. Carmen’s real mother presents that she made an agreement with Grandma but then Grandma broke it. The intention was that Grandma would have been keeped Carmen for a while until her parents get more money. Nevertheless Grandma had been hiding children, because she hates their father who wouldn’t go to church. Whereas Grandma concerned Carmen’s mother is a snake in the grass. And Grandma, a good Christian, believes ”The Good Lord appointed her guardian”.

Personally I do believe more the version of Carmen’s mother. If she really didn’t want to take care of her child why would she be interested all of the sudden when the child is almost thirty-years-old? On the other hand, could be possible that she just didn’t have enough money then. Anyway, Carmen thinks that Grandma is her mother because she raised her. That’s why Carmen wants to take care of Grandma, sending money for her. Carmen ask Grandma to get somebody to put burglar bars over all the windows. Grandma refuses until right at the end of the story. Probably she change her mind because the home island is not so safe anymore. There are thieves who break into everybody’s house. Other reason could be that Grandma is beginning to trust more Carmen. It feels like Grandma doesn’t have many people around her, maybe she is lonely. Carmen’s brother Richard doesn’t keep in touch with Grandma at all. That’s strange because Carmen does. May be that their mother is right, Grandma was really hiding them for their real mother and wouldn’t let them meet her. As a result, Richard would be embittered and angry and never want to meet Grandma again.

It was pretty difficult first read the text without punctuation but it was good to notice how important commas and full stops actually are. The interest and excitement increased towards the end of the story. After all the Full Stop is a good story and I would recommend to read it!

Why, honey?

The story ”Why, honey?” by Raymond Carver is a letter which the mother has written to someone. In the letter she tells a story about her son who always lies to her and gets outbursts. The mother’s and the son’s relationship isn’t very close because of a lying son and at the end of the story they don’t even keep in touch anymore.

When the son was fifteen their cat disappeared. A couple who lived near them told to the mother that they had seen the cat coming their backyard to die and they thought that her son had caused it with some other boy. The mother could’t believe that her son could do something like that.
When the son got a job he said that he had drawn 80 dollars’ check but the mother found the stub from his job and it was for 28 dollars. The son kept on lying without any reason. The mother thought that if she would ask her son where did he go last night he wouldn’t tell the truth. Once the son was supposed to have gone on a field trip but the next day she got a note from school which said that they wanted permission for a field trip. The mother even found a bloody shirt from the trunk of her son’s car and also a shotgun and a knife. The son gave a bad explanation to the shirt as he always did regardless of what the mother asked him.

Finally one day the mother asked the son why he was always lying but he just stared at her until he moved over alongside her and told her to kneel down. That was the last time the mother saw him except for at his graduation. The mother heard about him from somebody and noticed that he had became famous. She found out his address and began to wrote him a letter every few months but he never answered.Then she thought that he could find her if he wanted and took an unlisted number and changed her name. The mother saw once a car on the street with a man inside and knew he was watching her. And after that she answered phone but nobody talked to her. She was very afraid of everything.

I think that the mother’s claims were always right. The son was always so mysterious and the mother found out many times that he was lying like about his field trip or what he had earned from his job. She had many valid evidences which told much about the son’s honesty.
The mother wrote the letter because she wanted someone to know the story of her son and probably because she wanted to talk about it with someone and get advice.